My recount in the water

My time in the water recount

WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.

Task description: Today I had to create a recount about a time I went to the beach. My recount is written below.

On the weekend i went to the beach and i went there with my family and did some bombs it was a sunny day and there was a blue fish in the water it was a fast fish because it swam away from me fast and then my cousin did a mean bomb. The water was warm as soon as i jumped in, we stayed there for three hours. We laugh and payed all afternoon, we played water volleyball and my cousin won he always wins because he is really good.

It was a good day i cant wait to go again. I hope i get to go again after school because its hot today.

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